I think you did a great job with this project!You brought the meaning of the words out very well. And you can clearly tell that the focal point is determined. The scale is good as well.
Amazing job! Honestly, I'm really not sure where to go with this critique. All the words look great and the flow and design moves my eyes around it WELL.
I really like the way you laid out your words. It has very good visual flow, the word focused really does make you focus your eyes go upward. But I feel the word determined is the focal point because it is very bold and large, I like the way she emphasized the word by adding in exclamation points. I liked the way she did hard working and how the letter R connected them both together it definitely makes it more interesting.
This is by far the best one I've seen. Everything is emphasized and really brings out the meaning of the word. I love the first one. One suggestion I have, is how you tried making WORKING HARD more prominent in the second one, try flipping the boldness, making HARD bold instead of WORKING. But seriously, BEST ONE SO FAR!!
I think you did a great job with this project!You brought the meaning of the words out very well. And you can clearly tell that the focal point is determined. The scale is good as well.
ReplyDeleteI like it and you did a really nice job, the only problem I see is that you need more negative space, it is a little cluttered
ReplyDeleteYou have really good movement in your art work. I see a lot of action and it draws my eye throughout the whole pice.
ReplyDeleteAmazing job! Honestly, I'm really not sure where to go with this critique. All the words look great and the flow and design moves my eyes around it WELL.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you laid out your words. It has very good visual flow, the word focused really does make you focus your eyes go upward. But I feel the word determined is the focal point because it is very bold and large, I like the way she emphasized the word by adding in exclamation points. I liked the way she did hard working and how the letter R connected them both together it definitely makes it more interesting.
ReplyDeleteThis is by far the best one I've seen. Everything is emphasized and really brings out the meaning of the word. I love the first one. One suggestion I have, is how you tried making WORKING HARD more prominent in the second one, try flipping the boldness, making HARD bold instead of WORKING. But seriously, BEST ONE SO FAR!!
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